"Your Life's Account...NOTE IT FRIENDS,,,,?
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Your happiness is your profit
Your sorrows are your losses
Your soul is your goodwill
Your heart is your fixed asset
Your duties are your outstanding expenses
Your friendship is your hidden adjustment
Your character is your capital
Your knowledge is your investment
Your patience is your interest
Your mind is your bank balance
Your bad thinking is your depreciation
Your behavior is your journal entry
Your wife is your partner
Your child is your long term goal and
Your death is your closing stock"
Nothing like poetry. to distratic from the real problems of society... WHY? Really, Why? What is this? Are you looking for kuddos? O wow your ability to be creative with symbolism is such a great and wonderful thing, wow look another poet! Gee gollie I guess all my problems are sovled!. Ether way buddy its nice just seems missed placed here. I mean its great only thing I conflict with is the whole idea of happiness being profit, that just sounds like more pursuit of happiness bs the American Culture thinks well solve all are problems, darn founding fathers. And the fact that most of these people on here whould have to be over 30-40 to actually appricaite it. Other then that how about we keep this from being a place to display are poetry? Or maybe put it in a different section? Then you could get the prasie and kudos you deserve! But as far as getting attention here for it... I hope I didn't piss you off.
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