Is the punctuation correct in this essay? Would you change any sentences?
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graduating in two years and will have to decide what college to go to. I really want
to go to a college that has gymnastics but there are only four colleges in Ohio that
have gymnastics as a varsity sport. My mom wants me to go to N.C. State since I
take post-secondary classes and it's cheaper than most colleges. I won't be able to
go to a really expensive college because Erica will graduate a year after me and my
parents will have to be able to put her through college too. People tell my mom that
she should just have us take out a loan, but she doesn't want us to have that debt
with us when we graduate from college and try and find a house and things like
that. It makes me wonder what is going to happen when it's time for me to graduate.
I have two jobs now and am saving some money to go toward college. I'm trying
to keep good grades so that I'll be able to get scholarships to pay for a good
amount of my college. I am also trying to take as many college classes now while
I'm still in High School so I won't have to pay for those classes after I graduate. I
know everything will probably work out, hopefully, but it sort of scares me. I
realize it's a whole lot worse for a lot of other people, but I want to become
successful. Once I become successful I want to find a way to help those people
out!
Answer:
not to be mean i just dont know where to start.
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