Can you re-word this better?
Question: Casino Floor Relations Attendant
Observed the overall Slot section assigned. Kept guests informed on events and promotions. Cash Handling and minor repairs. Attended to customer needs and inquiries.
January 2002 - November 2003
Hub Office Clerk
Ran daily reports, processed inter-store transfers and sales detail.
Provided customer support. Maintained filing daily reports, copying, faxing and data entry with use of Microsoft applications. Counted and processed all daily cash revenue
Library September 1999-2001
Front Desk Clerk
Assisted patrons with media materials, checking out and returning of books. Filing and large amounts of photocopying. Data entry with the use of Microsoft Applications
Answer:
Looks like you have done a pretty good job there. I can suggest the use of bullets for each action you performed and use an action word to begin the statement like:
Filed
Handled large amouts of photocopying
Entered data using Microsoft Applications (year of microsoft applications)
Maintained daily reports.
etc. You know what I mean, it looks good..
If you are only allowed to report in sentence fragments, then you've done well. However, you might want to enumerate or bullet and indent each phrase so that you aren't considered illiterate regarding sentence structure.
i.e.:
Casino Floor Relations Attendant:
1. Observed the overall slot section assigned.
2. Kept guests informed of events and promotions.
3. Handled cash and minor repairs.
4. Attended to customer needs and inquiries.
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