Cover letter, internal position? Is had to be under 1800 characters.?
Question: This is the bulk of the letter that I have for an internal position. Suggestions?
As a help desk representative, xxCompany has served as an excellent source for xx.xx.xx. Through customer contact, I am aware of the customer experience and as well as experience with the customer call flow. Using problem solving skills, I am able to convey information in a clear, concise manner.
Currently, I will be graduating with Bachelor degree in xxx. This degree has allowed me to experience knowledge of information systems, technical communication and business strategies to present recommendations for business processes. I have experience with: VB, C++, HTML, SQL and Microsoft Office. As a team leader though college assignments and experience leading inservices at the local YMCA, I feel that I can support the this position from my education and xx background.
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As a help desk representative, xxCompany has served as an excellent source for xx.xx.xx. Through customer contact, I have managed the customer experience and I have experience with customer call flow. I am able to convey information in a clear, concise manner and have excellent problem solving skills.
Currently, I will be graduating with Bachelor degree in xxx. This degree has allowed me to demonstrate my ability with information systems, technical communication and business strategies. I have also been able to present recommendations for business processes.
I have experience with: VB, C++, HTML, SQL and Microsoft Office. As an experienced team leader though college assignments and with my experience of leading inservices at the local YMCA, I believe that I have the skills and attributes to make a success of this position and to contribute value to the team and the business in moving forward.
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