10 points if you can come up with a message for a business post card?
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Thank you for order! To show our continued appreciation for your business, here is 10% off your next purchase. We look forward to hearing from you again. Have a picture perfect day!
Pics for less
we love to reflect your image.
Thanks for sharing your most treasured moments with us.. we look forward to seeing you again. 10% on your next purchase .. see you soon!
I hope that is ok.. I'm not a pro lol
If you have a logo, use that on the postcard first of all. I am working on opening a new hospital, and our marketing manager talks over and over again about the importance of a logo and "branding" of a business. It stays in customers minds. Perhaps for something original (just saw your comments) you could have underneath the logo "Where life is art" or something like that.
Then I would boldly place on the card (larger, different, bold font) 10% off your next purchase. People will see that and be less likely to throw it away.
I would then state something simple like this:
Thank you! We value you as a customer. As a token of our appreciation, please use this coupon to save on your next purchase.
Too wordy will lose them...people get junk mail all the time, so short and sweet is best.
Hope I helped!
Try this:
Hi, (customer)
Just wanted to thank you for your order on (date of order). I consider it a privilege to be your photographer. To show my appreciation, simply bring this postcard with you for 10% off your next purchase!
Again, thanks for the privilege!
(your name, phone, email)
****
Hope this helps. Good Luck!
hope this is worth the sum you spent,
Hope you count it gain.
next time i'll part with ten percent,
hope i'll see you soon again.
P.S.
Enjoy the pics.
Here is a message with a Western theme.
Howdy partner,
Mosey on it and bring us them pritty snapshots ya made at Aunt Martha's birthday party last month. We'll print 'em on 100 post cards for ya. We'll even give ya 10% off yer furst purchase if ya mosey on it with them pritty pictures. We're a'waitin' for ya to drap by!
We love to capture your memories, and because you remembered to think of us here is a token of our appreciation.
10% off your next purchase.
Don't try to be too cute. Just say what you mean and mean what you say.
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